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Wednesday, August 28, 2019

My six sentence story

This week we have learnt how to write a six sentence story. A six sentence story is a narrative and has six parts. it has once upon a time and introduces the main character.


1. where they live : in New York 
2. where they talent : football swimming art and singing 
3. the problem : was the car broke down  
4. felt : sad  
5. how thy solved the problem : they called the AA to help maddy get her car fixed  
This is my six sentence. 

5 comments:

  1. hi risha you have done an great job

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  2. hi risha you have done an great job

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  3. Hi risha you have done a grat job on your six sentence i like how you put pictures and how your car broke down on the side of the highway wall not you but maddy wall done grat job

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  4. Hi, it's me love your buddy I really like how you did your title. My class made a made up story like you did. did you know that you could make that a paragraph. did anybody help you?

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  5. Hi,Risha I really like the way you put full stops. I wish my class did that. maybe you could you Just make the background white. Did you do this after school?

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