last week's writing

last  week we had a test and in that test there was a writing test we did it we had to make sure we had the full stops the question mark  apostrophe and all the the others and our story was a about  2 dogs playing at a beach. and we had to describe what dose the picture  look like . 

The dogs at the beach

I can see two dogs playing at the beach. I can feel  the nice windy day. The watercolour is a light blue colour. I can see a wave coming. The dogs are splashing. The dog is black, the other dog is brown and white. Where the black dog is standing there is greyish black sand. I hear the dogs splashing around. They are playing at the beach to get their energy out so they can  go to bed. The dogs are having a great time at the beach. On a Saturday afternoon two dogs were playing at the beach.Suddenly there was a loud noise. The dogs turned around, they saw a kid screaming furiously. Frightened, the two dogs sprinted behind a bush. Their owners came up to the dogs 

and gave them a hug.

By Risha