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Sunday, September 29, 2019

my persuasive writing

You should go to Sydney. My persuasive writing.  

  • It is hot not rainy. 
  • Because there are a lot of different fruits.
  •  You can adventure around.
  • There is heaps of stuff there to see.
  • Like you can go in the Opera House. 
  • You can go to the markets.
  •  can see Kangaroos but don't go close.   .

1 comment:

  1. Hi Risha. It's Izanna's mum. Love the blog. Look forward to seeing more of your work :)

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